The storm made me feel scared because trees were bashing to the ground.
The storm sounded like ghosts whistling in the air and trees bashing down.
The storm looked scary with huge trees flying around. Big trees falling down.

By Baz

One day Murphy couldn’t find his bone. He looked everywhere. Murphy sneaked into the garden and he dug 40 holes trying to find his bone. He couldn’t find it!
Poor Murphy tripped and fell into the biggest hole. He was stuck. Murphy barked and howled, calling to Stella. Stella heard Murphy and came running. She pulled and pulled. When Stella got Murphy out of the hole he felt dirty and exhausted. Murphy and Stella tried to get to sleep. They slept all day and when they woke up they felt fine!

By Baz

One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive when some aliens invaded them. They hear a WHIRRR and went and hid in a bush. Out came a cute alien and said “Hello”. Jim and Debbie stole the aliens’ guns and shot them in the head. They stole a bomb and blew the aliens heads off. Blood came spilling out. Jim and Debbie got a knife and cut the aliens up. They ate the aliens for tea. Jim said that it tasted like sausages. Debbie said “No, it tastes like slime”. Debbie spewed up but then the aliens kissed Jim and Debbie. The aliens married Jim and Debbie. They blasted off to space and lived happily ever after.
By Baz, Harrison and Brodie.

Autumn feels like old, cold and crunchy leaves.
Autumn feels like warm dressing gowns.
Autumn looks like old and spiky leaves.
Autumn sounds like crackling leaves and rain on the roof.
By Baz

Term 1

My favourite thing this term was when some animals came to visit Room 13. I got to hold the goat. It was good because I had never held a goat before. I liked to look at the animals. I didn’t get to hold the goat for a very long time. There were five goats, two dogs, one puppy and a piglet. It was embarrassing because Omar got to hold Jazz and I didn’t. Then the bell rang and I ran back to the classroom and put my hat away. Then I ran to the mat. I walked to my mum and then I went home. I went to bed because I was tired! I woke up and got my bag ready.
By Baz

Granny Lima's Bedtime Story

We are learning to retell a story March 2008


Once upon a time there lived a princess. She wanted to go out of the kingdom. The ogre wouldn’t let her go. She hid behind the bushes and she heard the ogre. In the morning the princess went to the ogre and she said, ”I know what you want.” He let her go out of the kingdom. The princess rode out of the gate. The princess went over the mountain. She found the ogre’s son, the prince. She took him back to the palace and they got married. They lived happily ever after.
By Baz